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 Portfolio Redesign
 

 
posterredisgn
Original design Redesign
Evaluation

All around this is a crappie design. There isn't any structure to it, The type (meaning the spacing, kerning, leading was done by a seventh grader. The Composition and hierarchy is lacking. Like I said piece of crap.
 

 
 Strategy

Now here is a huge improvement to the purpose of the piece. It reads sophistication, not to mention it shows style.
There is now a hierarchy with in the piece, also a grid system is definitely being used to design the piece so that there is a sense of structure to it.